![]() ![]() Needs attention - I've done a ce, but there are questions and suggestions above for things.I'll add a note here to say that some of the corrections to quotations in the reception look small but the nature of the mistake suggests a major gap in the grasp of English of someone making such errors - cutting them off halfway, leaving out parts of a noun phrase so it's nonsense, misinterpreting a critic statement, leaving out the actual criticism in the quote.The article have different things in AmEng and BritEng, could it be standardised to one or the other - I'd recommend BritEng for proximity and similarity to Sweden.write in the sentence who said that and why they're important in terms of the game's dev ![]() Needs some inline attribution for the "playing with gravity" quotation - i.e.In my ce of the section, I've added a 'who?' tag to an instance of "he" - it's not clear if this is the narrator or the uncle.The Gameplay section has a lot about the introduction to the world cutscene, which isn't really the gameplay.Do "waste disposal system" and "waste disposal dimension" really warrant quotation marks?.The "brilliant scientist" needs a citation - refs can come at the end of a block of sentences if it's just information being sourced, but all quotes must be directly supported by their source.If it's not an actual quotation, remove the marks. either needs a citation for the quotation or, preferably, to rephrase. The lead sentence The game was "re-developed professionally" after the collaboration with Coffee Stain Studios.Opening Kingsif ( talk) 01:41, 2 February 2020 (UTC) Reply Style contribs) 01:41, 2 February 2020 (UTC) Reply.
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